Primary fault: Quiet pelvis / large X-factor from restricted lower-body rotation (minor). Overall: good. This is a DTL clip, so the lateral-pelvis-first move your coach assigned cannot be measured directly — the shift runs along the camera axis and both transition-lead keys arrived unavailable. To verify the assigned move, film the next set FACE-ON so transition_lateral_lead_ms@Mid-Downswing and pelvis_lateral_shift_idx@Mid-Downswing become readable.
Checkpoints · P1–P8
Coach's notes
1.This is a DTL clip, so the lateral-pelvis-first move your coach assigned cannot be measured directly — the shift runs along the camera axis and both transition-lead keys arrived unavailable. To verify the assigned move, film the next set FACE-ON so transition_lateral_lead_ms@Mid-Downswing and pelvis_lateral_shift_idx@Mid-Downswing become readable.
2.External-focus cue for the assigned move: feel your lead hip 'bump toward the target' a beat before the hands start down — like pressing into the lead foot to start the motion. On course this ground-up start keeps the club from getting thrown out and tightens your two-way miss.
3.Posture is a strength here (spine tilt retained address-to-impact, no early-extension flag) — protect it while you add the pelvis bump so you don't trade good posture for a slide.
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Faults
Quiet pelvis / large X-factor from restricted lower-body rotation